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Kevin Robinson's avatar

Nice!! I want to know what happens next!!! Perfect.

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Maddie Rune🥀's avatar

Thank you very much for reading 💖

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Michael's avatar

Yes indeed, another keeper. I grew up with short stories, loving every word. Ray Bradberry comes to mind now, again you still hold your own uniqueness. Thank you for sharing.

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Maddie Rune🥀's avatar

Thank you very much for reading. I’m glad you enjoyed it. I have a lot of fun writing short stories. I need to get back to work on my book 🤣

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Bryce's avatar

A book of short stories, right? lol

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Maddie Rune🥀's avatar

It’s a novella called “bone ash glaze”

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Bryce's avatar

Gave me goosebumps! I enjoyed a theme of self-discovery here, where to find who we are, we have to step through doors, but we also have to let rooms become. And along the way, we get a glimpse of who we become. Great read.

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Maddie Rune🥀's avatar

Thank you so very much! I appreciate you taking the time to read and comment your thoughts 💖

I’m glad you loved it.

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Keith Williams's avatar

This is awesome Maddie. Thanks for sharing. I would like to follow this story further and find the answers to the doors opening and how the lady playing piano ties in…lovely!🥰😍

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Maddie Rune🥀's avatar

Thank you so very much! 💖

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Ed Corbett's avatar

Good story. Left me wanting more. I hope to see a continuation.

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Maddie Rune🥀's avatar

Thank you very much. There may be one. 😉

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